Animation for Revolution Dancewear

I am deep in the process of another animation for Revolution Dancewear.  Here is the main character - a dance teacher who's life is made much easier by a great service that revolution provides

This is a rejected sketch that I think is pretty cute. It just didn't convey what they are trying to say in this frame.  

This is a rejected sketch that I think is pretty cute. It just didn't convey what they are trying to say in this frame.